Benefits of good copywriting

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When trying to sell or promote a product it always pays to re read what you’ve written out loud.

The text above is trying to promote their BBQ facilities but have made a bit of a boo boo with the copywriting. Perhaps saying will lead you in the right direction would be a better choice of words.

The phone number also happens to be wrong, one too many numbers. Checking your work really can help.


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